ext_56974 ([identity profile] kendas.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] aurora_primavera 2010-03-02 06:20 pm (UTC)

This was lovely and really sweet. I really liked the way you used the flasbacks intersperced in the story to develop Jared and Jensen's growing relationship. And I loved the way Jensen gave his answer with the kiss and the mouthful of water.

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